Further Drafting

After the first drafting stage I then progressed to create a further draft of the design. The image above evidences that the design has progressed as one of the London paintings which I created has now been included within this. This draft still needs to be further drafted as the elements within the design don't work well together and the design appears to be too busy, with very little white space. Therefore the text will be changed in order to include more white space within the design. I also think the colours of the text need adjusting as I don't think this works very well due to the colour palette used within the London painting